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Re: Blades and Bargains
The swill of meal went down Amarian’s throat, yet it brought him no solace from what plagued his mind. He still heard Naldar’s words in his head, the ones that ...
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Re: When We've Been There
Mulholland wandered down the long dark hallway. It was silent and very cold, its air chilling his lungs as he breathed. He did not want to be here on this ...
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Re: The Road to Exodus
Hi mirecca. :) I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. Well, I have to say that you pulled off the opposing viewpoints aspect very well. Both men ...
Jun 19, 2009 -
Re: Absalom, my son
Hey Kylan! Been a long time since i sat down to review some of your stuff. I'll get right down to it. I really liked this story. It reminded me ...
Jun 19, 2009 -
Re: Carouselia
The twisted shapes of the wooden animals looked different beneath the moonlight. Hallie could almost sense a mystical aura about the whole affair, sneaking into the old park just to ...
Jun 18, 2009 -
Re: Driven to Witchcraft
Hi Plus-One. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer today. Well, this is the second time I'm having to type up this review. The first time, my internet cut ...
Jun 14, 2009 -
Re: Dark Day Dreams
Hi GoodToGo! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, I could tell what the protagonist of this story was going to be like in the first ...
Jun 14, 2009 -
Re: On Writing YWS Fanfiction
On Writing YWS Fanfiction So, you look around YWS. You see all these cute little stories about the various members. Personalities blown out of proportion, twisted, and modified to fit ...
Jun 11, 2009 -
Re: The Nature of Ideas
Ideas are the heart and soul of writing. You can have a wonderful mastery of grammar and be a genius at creating characters and generating dialogue between them, but if ...
Jun 11, 2009 -
Re: Giant Eagle Jungle
Hi Magnus! I'm Conrad, and I'll be your reviewer for today. I have to say that I liked the premise of this story a lot. Though at first I thought ...
Jun 11, 2009 -
Re: Deleted due to lack of quality
Hi huggybear. I am Conrad, and I will be reviewing your work today. She stared in to the mirror, penetrating her own eyes, blood shot pools of brown stared back ...
Jun 11, 2009 -
Re: Robin
I remember that, when I was small, I found a baby robin beneath a tree. It had fallen from its nest, though where that nest was we could not see. ...
Jun 11, 2009 -
Re: Ramree
For future reference, this story is based off of the events of the Battle of Ramree. It does not take place in Japan itself, so that might explain the crocodiles ...
Jun 11, 2009 -
Re: Ramree
Hell is noise. It is a cacaphony of vicious sounds, the screams of the damned, the roar of demons, the thrashing of torture. And it is the quiet spaces in ...
Jun 10, 2009 -
Re: Lonely on a Limb - Short Story
Hi Crownlessking! I'm Conrad Rice and I'll be your reviewer for today. This was certainly an interesting story. Though I didn't really see much happening in it. So someone is ...
Jun 4, 2009
